While your comparison does good work with syllable count, other instructions weren't followed: "The first line should concentrate on one portion of the whole thing you've identified in your title.The second line should compare that portion of the whole thing you've identified in your tile with something else. The comparison should be figurative rather than literal, and you should use a metaphor."
While your comparison does good work with syllable count, other instructions weren't followed: "The first line should concentrate on one portion of the whole thing you've identified in your title.The second line should compare that portion of the whole thing you've identified in your tile with something else. The comparison should be figurative rather than literal, and you should use a metaphor."
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